Fix documentation defects found by an adversarial review
Fifteen findings, all verified before acting. The ones that mattered: - Corrections added without updating what they corrected. §5's table still said a cap-less NURI is one "without :k:", two hundred lines after §4 established the discriminant is `r:`. Same shape of defect in the P1a report, which kept the sentence "it is the owner's keyring, upstream the keyring is the wallet" — the exact sentence §4quater declares wrong, and the one that produced a global in-memory keyring. - A wrong source citation: RootCapRefresh/BranchCapRefresh live in verifier/src/commits/mod.rs, not repo/src/commit.rs, and are no-op stubs. - Documentation describing deleted code: isolation.ts, discovery.readIndex, the global index, and an acceptance test that was dropped with discovery. - The P1a implementation report had aged into being wrong in four places (caps not persisted, inbox processing not started, plain string types, the :k: segment). It is dated, so it now carries a header saying what later lots overtook, rather than being rewritten. - vision.md stated "a document's data is stored encrypted" in the present tense. That is the target; here the cap value is the constant OK and nothing is encrypted. Said plainly now. - Prose left mangled by an earlier mechanical find-and-replace, in four places I had claimed were repaired. Also: reach.ts and connect.ts had no home in the permanent docs — the boundary and the connection sequence are now described in simulation.md, not only in a brief.
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notifications — none of these is enumerated across accounts. Each is reached by
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what is already reachable to me:
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- my own docs (always in `self.repos`, and whose caps what I hold holds);
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- my own docs (always in `self.repos`, and whose caps I hold);
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- docs whose cap an owner has delivered to my inbox (`shareCap` — see the
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per-document ReadCap in [`simulation.md`](./simulation.md));
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- my inbox (deposits addressed to me).
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